| A Review of: P by Jeff BurseyIn Fitzgerald's Tender is the Night, the wife of a minor character
describes the novel her husband is writing:
"It's on the idea of Ulysses," continued Mrs. McKisco."Only
instead of taking twenty-four hours my husband takes a hundred
years. He takes a decayed old French aristocrat and puts him in
contrast with the mechanical age-"
Her husband interrupts, afraid the idea will "get all around
before the book's published." Since Ulysses, numerous novelists
have adapted Joyce's structure. Publicity touts Andrew Lewis Conn
as the latest, for in P he provides readers with a day and a half
in the life of Benjamin Seymour, a pornographic film-maker, and
Stephanie (Finn) Welland, a ten-year-old runaway. Echoing Ulysses
may sell books better than saying that Conn is obeying Aristotelian
unities. The setting is New York City, the time is June 16-17, 1996,
and the main characters, credible to varying degrees, are firmly
placed before the reader's eye. Finn and Benji come from very
different backgrounds, but they are bound to connect.
The idea of connection is part of the novel's structure, and is a
prime concern of its characters. Conn joins Dos Passos' newspaper
headlines technique with a fantasy screenplay involving Disney
figures, film techniques, stream of consciousness, and, towards the
end of the novel, a subdued, effective question-and-answer chapter
which, read in context, is a catechism. The questions are not along
the lines of "What is God?" but "At the end of his
journey did Benji receive a hoped-for sign of providence?"
Occasionally depth is strained for, and identifying Benji with
Christ by way of their shared age is a distraction. Conn shows
respect for even the minor characters whose lives intersect with
Benji and Finn, bringing to mind Joseph McElroy's novel Women and
Men, where people who never meet, though they live in the same
building, invisibly touch other lives.
Benji has not recovered from the loss of his first love, Penelope
Pigeon, with whom he co-starred in films like Lawrence Of A Labia,
while Kate Welland has not found anyone to be with after divorcing
Martin, Finn's father. There is no reason to think the status of
either will change, and the first meeting of Benji and Kate is not
auspicious:
"As [Kate] sat down, Benji caught a glimpse of a large mole
positioned just on the underside of her left calf. Easing into her
chair, she subtly but not unconsciously shifted the mole away from
him toward invisibility, and Benji knew he had her. Benji loved
doing this-sniffing out the hidden nexus of a woman's sexuality...
The mole bespoke of wildness, tenderness, adventure, chances taken,
mistakes made, just-passed youth and encroaching middle-age-dom,
hidden mysteries of the body, the secret language of kisses, Arabian
nights. His guess was this third nipple caused her a great deal of
pleasure and shame."
Conn has paid particular attention to making Benji's mourning
believable, perhaps at the expense of Finn, who is not realistically
depicted. But P is not a realistic novel. It incorporates devices
found in Modernism, Post-Modernism, pop culture and pornography,
though the elements do not always cohere. Its tone is at times too
jokey and jumpy, but a nervy quality is essential to be able to
write the following without reducing Benji to a caricature: "He
considered his ejaculate, archipelagically streaked across his
belly, a sight he always found strangely reassuring. His shyly
receding shaft was now coated in a thick pudding of saliva, Jergen's,
and come." Perhaps these might look like strange words to read
in what is, at heart, a Romance, but in Benji's world there is
always this kind of flux, from self-satisfaction to selfless love.
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