| A Review of: Coyote by Steven W. BeattieCharlie Baker is an aging eccentric who lives in a treehouse on an
island off the coast of Vancouver. He cultivates his vegetable
garden, teaches the neighbour boy-an afflicted youth named Festus
who suffers from what is described as "an extremely rare
chromosomal syndrome that causes premature maturity and aging"-about
car repair, and spends his days repeatedly pushing a large rock to
the top of a steep hill, before rolling it back down again and
starting the process over from scratch.
But a man named Brian, who claims to be a writer, is convinced that
Charlie Baker is actually an eco-terrorist named Coyote, who sabotaged
pulp mills, freed animals from game preserves and blew up bridges
before supposedly dying in a botched attack on a cement factory.
Brian has come to Artemis Island, where Charlie, now in retirement,
keeps his treehouse and grows his vegetables, ostensibly to research
a fictionalized account of Charlie's-or Coyote's-acts of
"ecotage". But there are indications that Brian may have
darker motives: Charlie's career as an eco-terrorist has intersected
with Brian's life on three separate occasions, and it is possible
that the younger man has actually come to the island to bury Coyote,
not to praise him.
Meanwhile, Janwar Singh, an inspector with the RCMP, has been
trailing a possible serial killer who may be involved in the
disappearances of several women in the Vancouver area. One of the
women, Rita Norman, was an ex-girlfriend of Charlie Baker. When
Singh discovers Charlie's name in the missing woman's address book,
he decides to kill two birds with one stone: travel to Artemis to
question Charlie and to spend some time at a New Age retreat known
as The Last Resort, where he hopes to find a remedy for his stomach
troubles.
In Coyote, novelist and poet Brian Brett has concocted a plot so
mechanical, so carefully and deliberately contrived, that one can
practically hear the gears grinding rustily against one another.
There are coincidences aplenty on offer here, but not the type that
one might find in a Paul Auster novel, where someone's whole life
can change as a result of answering a telephone call that turns out
to be a wrong number. Auster's stories arise organically out of his
fascination with the role chance plays in human lives. By contrast,
there's little that's organic in Coyote, and much that feels
calculated. As an example, the retreat that Janwar goes to is run
by a latter-day hippie improbably named Wren Dancing, who just
happens to be an old friend of Singh's partner on the force, Corporal
Kirsten Crosby. This is blatant authorial imposition, the puppeteer
guiding his characters through their paces like marionettes.
But this is a quality that Brett himself underscores by continually
calling our attention to the fictional aspects of his narrative.
There are actually three Brians in the book: the author, the character
who arrives at Artemis Island looking for Coyote, and the first-person
narrator, who writes in italics and addresses a boy bearing a
suspicious resemblance to Festus. Brett is at his most playful in
these first person italicized passages, where he wantonly manipulates
the authorial distance to create something that "unfolds like
a Chinese puzzle, pieces inside pieces." He goes on to claim
that "the narrator (the one who keeps saying I' and uses this
italicized type) is not me either. As the fiction runs, so have I
run, and the narrator speaks what I would not speak although it is
me choosing the words."
Brian cautions the boy to whom he is writing, and by extension the
reader, that he is "what they call an unreliable narrator',"
and that we shouldn't be too quick to accept any of his assertions
at face value: "The truth? Reality? Logic? They're claptrap-
rhetorical weapons we use in arguments for power." By repeatedly
shifting the narrative distance between the reader and the first
person narrator, Brett highlights the artificiality of his story.
It is no accident that Charlie chooses the coyote-one of the
tricksters of the animal world-as his nom de guerre.
Unfortunately, Brett also habitually allows his narrator-and his
narrative-to devolve into polemic, which is less effective as a
fictional tool. Coyote is a very angry book, but its anger is not
directed at a particular malefactor; rather it's spread out like
buckshot. Urban planners, scientific researchers who employ animal
testing, the cosmetics industry, the abortion issue all come under
lengthy consideration in Brett's novel, but in each case the story
is forced to a grinding halt while we are subjected to the narrator's
hectoring diatribes.
Also distressing is the preponderance of linguistic infelicities
in the novel. The narrator misquotes Conrad's Heart of Darkness,
one of the characters is said to have "scowled wistfully",
and when a factory pipe is broken steam "and gooey stuff"
splatter everywhere. One character uses the word "bellicose"
and then two pages later speaks as though he were little more than
a backwoods hick: "Charlie don't go anywhere much, maybe a few
charity trips to help out locals. He likes his treehouse. He ain't
going anywhere."
Coyote is a pugilistic, rambling, wayward novel that somehow seems
too diffuse and too calculated at the same time. Brett's imagination
roams over an expansive terrain, and employs several different
storytelling modes, from straightforward narrative, to metafictional
gamesmanship, to self-righteous polemic, but there is a countervailing
sense of constriction within the book, as though various ill-fitting
pieces have been crammed into a box that's too small to hold them
all. The flashes of postmodern playfulness and narrative trickery
aren't sufficient to redeem a novel with plot is too contrived and
mechanical to be entirely effective.
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