| A Review of: Kilter: 55 Fictions by Michael GreensteinCenturies ago, John Gould's characters might have tilted against
windmills; today, they lean against the form of fiction itself.
While some of Kilter's 55 short stories fall flat, many of these
post-Borgesian fictions succeed. "Tell it slant," advised
Emily Dickinson, and Gould slants his microcosms in quirky, zany
sketches. Neither plot nor character development characterize Kilter;
and instead of epiphanies, we are confronted with counter-revelations
that angle into consciousness.
Take "Two Things Together", the first of 55: two plus two
do not necessarily add up to four in a kiltered world where asymmetry
abounds. Gould's sound bites usually involve incomplete or misdirected
dialogue between family members. "I liked it better back when
my son was into stuff I could understand." The narrator's
opening sentence points to a lack of understanding between generations,
even though the father can slang "into stuff." Within
these three-page formats understanding plays a key role between
characters, and between character and reader. Father-son dialogue
gives way to the narrator's domestic musings by the end of the
story. "Why is the light from a television set always blue?
This is one of the things I've been pondering. No matter what colours
are up there on the screen, the light flooding your room is blue.
Why? I don't get it. I don't get a lot of things, more all the time
if I'm not mistaken. An infinite number of things, probably, though
to tell the truth infinity is one more subject on which I'm a trifle
weak." This question sets the "blue" mood of postmodern
existentialism, and the blue light of (mis)understanding spreads
to an infinite number. Finite gaps between characters and readers
hint at infinite possibilities of success and failure. After infinity
the narrator reaches another anti-climactic beyond: "Every
once in a while I sip my Scotch, feel it burning its way down, down
to the heart of me. That's another thing. Heart?" Between
synecdoche and an abstracted infinity, Gould's fictions juxtapose
"two things" that accumulate and undermine the soul and
its expectations.
"Do the Math" grasps experience quantitatively and
qualitatively-African atrocities brought home to a white, western
Canadian city. During a slide show involving Tutsis and Hutus the
narrator tries to assimilate "eight hundred thousand people."
As the narrator's domestic situation is called into question by the
destruction of foreign domesticity, he imagines violence expanding
in a domino or off-kilter progression: "Some higher math, some
arcane equation" is called for. The final "so here we go
again" is typical of the flat, fatalistic, ironic endings of
these fictions that undercut our expectations. Expansiveness recurs
within the miniature sketch, "Prisoner". "Imprisoned
for a crime you can scarcely comprehend ... you determine to educate,
to expand yourself. To release yourself with language." The
narrator proceeds alphabetically through the dictionary as Gould
plays off the prison house of language against freedom of association
until he arrives at the word "infinite."
Gould tilts kabbalistically at the infinite (and Borges) in
"Raising the Sparks". On the anniversary of his father's
death, the narrator curates a retrospective exhibition of his
father's tiny linocuts, Postcard Prints. He intends "to dispel
some of the extraneous mystery surrounding the work, but to leave
the central mystery intact"-a comment applicable to Gould's
own tiny fictions. Self-critical hints scattered throughout
"Raising the Sparks" provide clues to Kilter. "Many
critics, predictably enough, have construed my father's shift to
this condensed format ... as a diminution, an attenuation. His
miniatures signify a loss of vitality." Comparable to haiku,
they "eschew pronouncement in favour of inkling, of implication.
As visible fragments, they express an acquiescence in his own finite,
fragmentary nature." His father's fragments belong to some
kind of kabbalistic order: "He liked the fact that they'd make
us wonder. And of course he planted them as clues to a larger pattern
which none of us, until now, have even suspected." After musing
at some length about the enigmas of fragments and totality, the
kabbalist's son concludes and kilters in undercutting irony: "And
then again, it may not."
More often than not, these fictions begin and end in medias res,
leaving the reader to fill in the background. Rhetorical questions
kilter. In "Leather" the female narrator wonders if her
brother's life might have been saved had he not left his leather
jacket behind: "Would this have been enough to knock the cosmos
off kilter, nudge it onto an alternate course, a future in which
the bullet would have passed right through him without puncturing
his lung?" Surprises in Gould's fiction arise from imagined
possibilities of alternate courses. Self-referential "Method"
is about "making connections" and "seeing different
images in a single shape." Gould knocks his microcosms off
kilter, and it's up to the reader to put things together again.
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