| A Review of: Unsettled by Graham GoodPoetic debuts need to clear a space in an already crowded field.
When a new voice is raised, it needs to be distinctive to gain a
hearing. Voice is not merely a metaphor: poets increasingly have
to take their work onstage at live readings and develop some kind
of vocal persona. The Homeric epics were oral performances long
before they were written down. Now, poems often exist in both
dimensions of reading: aloud, and on the page.
But even in print, poetry still "voices" itself: poets
invoke the muse, provoke with satire, evoke scenes and experiences.
The voice should be individual, though paradoxically it is often
heard in relation to the established voices the new poet has tried
so hard to leave behind.
To hear the new voice, audiences need to "place" it on
their existing map of the poetic territory. Where is it coming from?
How does it sound, and how does it resonate with its environment?
Even in a globalized culture, nationality still counts, as do region
and even city. But often the poet is speaking from (and about)
"away" rather than "home", and I don't just
mean travel poems. When home is described, it is frequently seen
as it was in the past, especially in childhood. The experience of
dislocation, spatial or temporal, is often what produces the calling
to write poetry in the first place, or rather, the second place.
Though all poetry relates to place, some is more tightly localized.
The topographical poems of the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries
are often devoted solely to evoking a specific locale. This could
be a country house, as in Ben Jonson's "To Penshurst" or
Andrew Marvell's "Upon Appleton House", and this tradition
continues at least as far as Yeats's celebration of Lissadell. The
Wordsworthian nature poem replaces the Big House with a peasant
cottage or an uninhabited landscape, while Eliot's Four Quartets
articulate both a personal and a cultural heritage through description
of four named places: "Burnt Norton", "East Coker",
and so on.
Where are we now with poems of place? Some of the most interesting
work lies between the travel poem (poet as visitor) and the domestic
poem (poet as denizen or citizen). The conditions of modernity often
lead to temporary "stays", measured in months rather than
the days of a visit or the years/decades of permanent residence.
These sojourns (the French sejour sounds better) might be occasioned
by a love affair, a short-term work assignment, or simply a retreat
for writing. The sojourner knows more than the visitor, but is still
an outsider to the "locals." The debut volume reviewed
here, Zachariah Wells's Unsettled, speaks from "away",
as the title indicates. The dialectic of home and away is highlighted
by the poet himself: for example, in one of Wells's section titles,
"Location, Relocation, Dislocation".
For Wells the "away" is the Far North. A native of Prince
Edward Island, he worked on Baffin Island and Cornwallis Island as
an air freight handler. His book is not a travel notebook: he stays
behind after the plane takes off. For many writers, either the
remote settings or the unusual job would have provided enough
novelty, but the combination here makes it doubly fascinating. A
section of work poems, one dedicated to Buzz Hargrove, details some
grim conditions: "80 below, wet boots, frozen fingers, frozen
toes, frozen wages." Another section relates a work accident:
"Yesterday Joe got his foot smushed good." Others
characterize co-workers, like "Jake", a "bull seal
of a man" with "flipper-huge hands and a slung gut."
These poems, written in vigorous demotic language, evoke a tough,
hard-drinking, masculine world, where the Arctic environment is
present as harsh conditions rather than beautiful scenery.
But later in the volume, the focus shifts from manual labour and
colloquial language to Northern landscape and introspection: "sky
land and sea elide/-horizons conflate/in the seamless white."
In several poems the narrator turns back from this encounter with
the void and heads back to town, as if the working community still
has his allegiance rather than the more "poetic" snowfields:
"we burned all our metaphors to stay warm." Still, the
poet as sojourner does not belong to this community any more than
he does to the snow and ice. He cannot escape introspection and
isolation by staying in the bar and the workplace. He has lost his
former community without gaining a new one. He laments this in his
farewell to the North: "O land, you have dispossessed me./ Can
I ever again claim the name of home?"
Eliot's original title for The Waste Land was "He do the police
in different voices" (itself a quotation from Dickens). Wells
can do the North in different voices. Yet this volume encompasses
soliloquy as well as ventriloquy. A distinct individual voice
lingered in my ear after reading this book, despite the poet's
claim: "O land, you have severed me from myself." The
voice is rueful, ironic, sharply observant, but always strong, as
it moves between the colloquial (Wells is good at catching the
syntax and the vocabulary of spontaneous speech) and a more
"literary" diction (he does not shrink from using poetic
invocations like "O land").
This debut is strong, and bodes well for the new generation of
Canadian poets. It shows that the poetry of place continues to be
vital-place as seen through a sojourn's interval, rather than a
visit's brevity or half a lifetime's familiarity. This is a poetry
of dwelling, of staying in a place long enough to experience
relationship, community, and self-change, but not long enough to
stop feeling "unsettled".
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