| A Review of: The Naked Island by W.P. KinsellaAnother delightful cover is wasted on this dog's breakfast of a
novel, full of self-indulgent, pretentious, Creative Writing 101
nonsense. The set up is promising, with ancient spirits connecting
with contemporary humans, and the novel narrated by an Ontario man
who committed suicide. The main character is Rachel Gold, a young
Ontario woman, rich, spoiled, and somewhat ditzy. She has a worthless,
druggie boyfriend who may or may not have betrayed her with her
sister, which is enough for her claim that she has stopped speaking,
but there is no evidence that she ever shuts up. I can see the
author's brain working, saying, I've traveled all over so let's get
some literary use out it.' Rachel travels to Israel, Egypt, Italy,
then to India, Nepal and on to Singapore, where the story really
begins as she meets and falls in love with a hotel clerk named Kifli
Talib, a Muslim. They eventually move on to Australia, but at this
point the novel falls apart with endless, repetitive scenes of their
tepid lovemaking, and struggles to defeat or embrace a spirit that
sometimes occupies one or the other. The novel might be subtitled
How a Spooky Rich Girl Spent Her Daddy's Money on Travel. There
are lots of meaningless semi-poetic phrases, and intentional
ambiguities, making the novel impossible and confusing. Time moves
forward and backward, and the ending, which may take place at some
point in the future, is completely ambiguous. The pretentiousness
goes on after the novel mercifully ends. Four record-breaking pages
of Acknowledgments list over 100 people as having had something to
do with the writing of this sub-mediocre first novel. I have published
over 30 books and I couldn't find more than a handful of people who
deserve thanks for my whole career.
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