| A Review of: Reconciliation by Susan BriscoeWith his first full collection, Hamilton poet Adam Getty takes up
his pen "to search for hope among Canadian peasants, / see
blood pour down / running in torrents / by the side of the curb,
staining snow." Reconciliation demonstrates that the People's
Poetry tradition, despite such serious blood loss, lives on.
In his most populist poems, the diction is that of the working man,
unpretentious but also, alas, uninteresting:
You can't do this the way they want,
at the proper speed, so trim
from below instead, slice twice
if you need it, just so's it gets done.
These are not decorative poems:
I must have done this a thousand times:
bolted the castings in, supported them
with chunks of steel-made sure
they don't shake when they're cut. The rust
has to come off, or they won't work.
The colloquial tone is tired and somewhat anxious, as if told over
a five o'clock beer. While this style suits the content, it does
tend to make the poems a bit soft.
And clearly, manual labour does get boring after a while, so the
poet's mind wanders to places like Dostoevsky's Russia or Shakespeare's
Naples. Getty starts to drop lots of Greek names-Solon, Pericles,
and Sophocles (all in one line!). He rebels against a dearth of
words too, breaking the populist rule of accessible language with
words like pleroma and phloem. This is one of the reconciliations
Getty, educated at the University of Toronto and employed in a
Burlington slaughterhouse, attempts in this book: "to walk out
of the library with ancient hands / still clutching me" and
"to pick up / knife or shovel and perform some work to further
my tradition."
Getty's poetry is weakest when he takes his plebeian mission too
far-as far as the streets of New York and the factories of Eastern
Europe. Affecting a populist sense of identity with the downtrodden
anywhere, these poems are disappointingly predictable and never
move beyond such clichd contrasts as the beggar with his tin cup
and the successful woman in her Bloomingdale's clothes. The voice
in these poems also fails to convince:
I don't care about myself-I have an ascetic
nature: but please give something
to these others. Go without food yourself,
see how much the body needs it. Terrible
is the scraping you feel inside your gut
He avoids this problem on more complicated personal terrain. In the
title poem, for instance, which deals with the strange dynamic of
married life, the ambiguities are more interesting than the revelations
that factory work is tedious and the homeless are hungry. Unfortunately
it is virtually the only poem to enter this intimate space. Several
of Getty's poems explore other territory however. Notably, he depicts
a strangely reversed relationship between water and earth that is
expressed as the "elusion of land." In the imagery Getty
develops, water becomes a metaphor for the mystical power of the
feminine in several poems with titles like "Mama" and
"The Maid of the Mist." Reconciling the masculine with
the feared feminine is another goal of these lyrics. Early in the
collection the poet is uneasy as he contemplates Lake Ontario:
"Deny the sway of her blue thighs: / she will force you to her
breast soon enough." In the last section of the book he conquers
this fear and finds his ultimate inspiration in the integration of
the feminine, here represented by Niagara Falls:
And as I reached out for her then, longing to embrace
my people at last, her voice was in me: let justice roll
down
like a mighty river, let mercy fall down all around us
and love
dwell in our midst like a mist that rises from the
water forever.
This is too gushy (though I applaud Getty for the courage to be so
uncynical). But these are also the poems that occasionally bring
him out of the predictable, preachy, and prosy voice that dominates
his workman poems. Tentatively, he begins to play with language:
She's a question, a sliver of silver
shivering on black water: a cloth
slipping down over Sherman Ave
Getty seems to be trying to negotiate a reconciliation between his
plain People's style and a more demanding poetics. This book
demonstrates a solid apprehension of the lyric form, each piece
developing a distinct idea and carried by a pleasing cadence (indeed,
Getty's verse is never stilted or forced, and his lines are broken
with confidence) but formal constraints are few. Mostly these are
short (nothing over three pages) free verse lyrics with regularised
stanza sizes: on the page they look like Steeltown industrial
buildings-plain and boxy, purposeful. But a prologue of five unrhymed
sonnets, the best part of this collection, suggests the potential
of Getty's poetry were he to apply a little more pressure to his
verse. Here, there is less opportunity for the sentimental content
that weakens other poems, and less energy is lost in loose construction
and dull language. Perhaps he does see that "The rust / has
to come off, or they won't work."
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