| A Review of: House Built of Rain by Tim BowlingHere's how Russell Thornton prefaces House Built of Rain, his
powerful new book of lyric and narrative poems:
Somehow I hear oarlocks and a rocking rowboat
striking the side of the house. Now it seems
the front door is being tried, the back door. Who is it
rowing around the house in this flood, wanting in?
And now I know it is rain - but it is too late;
a whole new rain has swept in through the rain,
and that rain is a solitary infant journeying
in its tiny vessel, its ark empty except for itself,
come here to nestle at the house. . .
All the impressive qualities of Thornton's work are evident here:
the fluid rhythm, the skilled use of repetition, the charged
atmosphere of mystery and awe, the intriguing use of metaphor, the
transcendent vision, the unsettling yet somehow consoling tone of
melancholy, and, most importantly, the salmon-sensitive knowledge
of his place, the shimmering, mist-haunted, ravine-cut city of North
Vancouver. No other contemporary Canadian poet so successfully
combines a powerful sense of geographic and spiritual belonging
with an equally convincing sense of alienation. In poems such as
"Heron", "The Gesture in the Creek", "Solstice
Mist", and the deeply affecting sequence of elegies to his
maternal grandparents, Thornton lovingly captures that shifting,
at-once-Eden-and-lost-Eden quality of North Vancouver, bringing its
creeks, ravines, weather and creatures vividly alive. Here, for
example, is the opening to "Heron":
In the deep-cut, swerving ravine
the hour before dawn. Creek more spirit than water
pouring white down the bouldery creek path
at arm's length toward me and past.
But then, as if in the very act of isolating the ephemeral nature
of his home, Thornton transfers that nature to his travels, creating
poems in which displacement is the keynote. "In the Sonora
Hills", "Magdalena Dawn", and, especially, "Nogales
Prostitutes", strikingly reveal the poet in the guise of a
lost traveller always in search of something impossible to name,
let alone grasp. In the latter poem, the speaker contemplates a
trio of teenaged prostitutes in a Mexican brothel. Then, choosing
to buy a bottle of brandy, take one drink, and walk outside into
"the afternoon/the light glassy-red like a candy heart,"
he concludes:
The rutted road now sifted me,
each particle of dirt a skull's eyehole,
the pure depth of a gaze
robbing me of any direction I knew.
These four lines are as perfectly crafted, intense, and metaphorically
startling as any I've read in years. The whole poem, in fact, is a
triumph of condensed storytelling and imagistic exactness (the
"kittenish, cute" prostitutes mentioned early on combine
wonderfully with the innocent, "candy heart" description
of the light near the end, just as the girls' pupils turn into the
skull's eyeholes of the dirt). "Nogales Prostitutes",
like so many of the poems in House Built of Rain, trembles with
essentialness-one reads it at once comfortable and uncomfortable
in the knowledge that the writing of it was no trivial enterprise,
no last-minute workshop assignment polished up to meet the requirements
of a creative writing degree. In fact, Thornton stands as far outside
the institutionalized world (with its anti-lyrical and anti-narrative
theorizing) as it's possible to stand. His work is refreshingly
old-fashioned in the most honourable sense of the term-that is,
it's fashioned from the old, built on a bone-deep sense of poetic
tradition, unapologetic about its metrical borrowings from the King
James Bible and its vatic indebtedness to a wide range of writers
captivated by poetry as a form of prayer/worship/incantation (Blake,
Yeats, Amichai, Layton, Lawrence, to name a few). Intensity shimmers
in line after line. Here are a few of his immediately engaging
openers:
Dawn a nullity at my side
("Owl")
More night on this night, more hours of darkness
("Solstice
Mist")
On my knees in the cold grass, among the leaves
("Circle of
Leaves")
My eyes open on his effacing glare ("The Shop")
I was walking and hurling myself and shouting a taunt
("Running")
These are perfectly weighted lines that get right down to the
business of the poem's core attempt to sort something out. One feels
their authority and is drawn in as if on one of the poet's cherished
ocean tides.
But what exactly is Thornton trying to sort out? Quite simply, he's
seeking to place himself in direct relation to the fundamental
mysteries, trying to work his way back to some purer origin: "I
must still go down the inside of my spine, following/the fire back
beyond its origin to where I am altar and prayer" is how he
describes the journey in "House in the Rain". The language
is often religious because the search is-what other name do we give
to our affinity for solitude, romantic love, nature, if we don't
call it God? Thornton's not afraid of that loaded word. Rather, he
embraces it, turns it outward. People and animals regularly appear
in his poems as either fellow pilgrims or those who possess the
mysterious, sacred wisdom he's pursuing: a handicapped busker singing
karaoke in the Seabus terminal, a disfigured Dublin fruit-seller
who had "opened her mouth/as a prophetess might/to reveal
divine will," gulls who are "messages sent from spirit
to matter and back to spirit again": all life is bound to us,
Thornton is saying, through this rapt immersion in creation and
re-creation.
But if all this seems overly mystical, don't be misled. Exactly
what gives Thornton's search for spiritual affirmation its absolute
integrity is his clear-eyed honesty about poverty, violence,
loneliness, and other forms of the dark. Lesser poets equate tragedy
easily with Truth, and exploit the dark for cheap effects, wearing
misery like a badge of honour. Thornton is far beyond all that
tawdry hipness of mainstream culture. When he writes out of remembered
pain, he does so with the gratitude of having come through. As he
writes in "The Day of My Beginning", a moving consideration
of his parents' doomed marriage:
I'll have to use whatever amount of spirit I have
to get through the next eight and a half years -
while they take their punishment and watch
what couldn't have lasted between them die.
I'll have to use more spirit than I have
to get through two, three decades after that.
But already, I'm the praise I'll utter.
But Thornton harbours no illusions either. He well knows the
insistence of the dark, how it rears up from the past or suddenly
breaks in anew. House Built of Rain closes, for instance, with these
unconsoling lines:
To remember is to see inside oneself for the length of a
life
lanes that will have always become empty of anyone.
It is to be an empty lane seeing an empty lane,
an emptiness remembering an emptiness.
House Built of Rain is so compelling precisely because of how it
uncannily balances despair and ecstasy. When Thornton writes,
"We are broken from a no one/and remade over and over again/into
a no one," we believe him, just as we believe him when, in a
burst of love for his failing grandfather, he promises "As
long as I can I will keep you warm."
But then, it is easy to believe a poet of such metaphorical power.
People getting on and off a bus are "an in and out breathing,"
seals appear as "living mineral," a creek is alive with
"sounds of birth-spanks and shrieking," a wave uproots
itself "out of its own moonlit entrails." Every page of
House Built of Rain turns up at least one such gem of insight,
description, connection. Poems such as "The Day of My
Beginning", "The St. Alice", "Night Bus",
"Harbour Seals", "Nogales Prostitutes", "The
Shop", "Solstice Mist", "Lanes" and a
half-dozen others brilliantly confirm Thornton's growing reputation
as our finest lyric poet.
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